Sunny-Side Up and Picturesque

By lupus tenebrae

I'm here with caramel still dancing 'round my head,   salt yet skittering across my lips as I gaze   at some distant watercolour dream. I then re-imagine sunset:   sunny-side up,  picturesque and fading with the
onset of the afternoon.

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Copyright 2014 lupus tenebrae
Published on Thursday, February 13, 2014.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Something I'd written on a napkin at a restaurant...when I wasn't stuffing my face. I guess you could say that I really "fed" off of the atmosphere.
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, February 13, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Excellent job capturing a moment in time! I like the idea of the candy rush still in your head and the taste still on your lips as you observe the scene. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Thursday, February 13, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium (275)By person wrote:

    This makes me feel like Ihop, haha... I thoroughly enjoyed this, great write!!

  • megaprime81 On Thursday, February 13, 2014, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    I'm very surprised that no one has yet commented on your work; this is a masterpiece. 10 "It pleases me to be the first"

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