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A sweet Valentine
By Peyton1
Sweets for my sweet
Are you a trick or a treat?
Every time that we meet
It's your smile that I seek
And then my knees become weak.
You say that you care
I see you everywhere
Your appearance so fair
I try hard not to stare
And then my heart doth dare.
Happy Valentine’s Day
Isn’t that what we say?
With you I wish to play
But can’t get you to stay
And then my smile fades away.
A sweet valentine, to me yet unknown
Candy and card, away I have thrown
So forever I spend this day all alone
My solitude to be my cursed throne
And then my heart turns to stone…..
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Copyright 2014 Peyton1
Published on Monday, February 3, 2014.
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Author's Note:
Happy valentines DayComments on "A sweet Valentine"
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A former member wrote:
I admire the change of attitude, and I truly feel the pain in the words. :) Keep it up.
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On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, Peyton1
(204)
wrote:
Why thank you very much miss Katherine, it sounds like you picked up on the painful words my pen continues to scribble between these lines. I am trying to run it out of painful ink, lol. Welcome to Dark Poetry! I haven't been active much lately, but trying to get back. I will be reading your works as well, thanks for reading and commenting...and every comment helps.... see ya.... ~ACE~
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
The wound of love is like no other.. love this one, Ace the hotrod :)
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On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, Peyton1
(204) wrote:
Thanks bunches for commenting miss Kendra! You are right, the L wound is the worst one. And it's so hard to stitch the L closed.... it must be because of the 90 degree turn at the bottom, haha! Thanks again, later girl........... ~ACE~
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A former member wrote:
great read will read more
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On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, Peyton1
(204) wrote:
Thank you for reading, glad ya liked my liitle cupid kicker poem. See ya....... ~ACE~
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A former member wrote:
Ah yes the loneliness of Valentines Day
and how you made yourself available to tht special someone In which you were the one receiving the card and candy. Nice write
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, Peyton1
(204) wrote:
Thank you for reading my work and for the comment. And welcome to our dark little corner of the world! I welcome all comments, as does pretty much everyone else here. Comment often, and post poems for us to read, that's how we all get to know each other. Thanks again for reading. Don't be shy, see ya around....... *~ACE~*
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
this was sweet, very strong feelings were.portrayed here. been alone on vday myself, never fun im sorry :( 10 for you !
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, Peyton1
(204) wrote:
Well, thank you for such a nice comment, miss.... I still don't know your name. Yeah, it does suck being alone on heart-day. I think I may just consider despising all holidays equally and be done with it! LOL Thanks for reading me, see ya......... *~ACE~*
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Mega awesome write. I love the last stanza and finishing line. Perfecto...it really brings it home. I can definitely relate. 10
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, Peyton1
(204) wrote:
Glad ya liked that ending I slammed out there! Thanks for the read and the comment, I appreciate it. Trying to get back into the swing of things, taking longer than I thought..... Thanks again, see ya................. *~ACE~*
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A former member wrote:
Stunning! I loved this piece! Had a set rhythmic flow throughout! And cleverly closed! I really enjoyed this, nice work! 10
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, Peyton1
(204) wrote:
Thank you much for your comment, I'm glad you found it to be enjoyable. I'm a little late but welcome to DP! I like your works as well, haven't commented much at all lately... been depressed for a while, it sucks! I think you are quite skilled, and I will comment soon. Thanks again for reading me...........*~ACE~*
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A former member wrote:
nice. sittin there talkin about butterflies in your stomach and shit... and it was all just a dream. great read
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, Peyton1
(204) wrote:
Hey, thanks for reading and welcome to DP as well. I like to lead the reader down a set path sometimes....... and then go off-roading a bit at the end. It keeps things interesting. It would be better if it was ALL just a dream sometimes, I think. lol I will have to make it to your page soon as well, thanks for commenting, Later.............. *~ACE~*
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