the Spaces Between Breathing

By Malice In Wonderland

flickering

we held our souls
aloft and shaded
from an errant breeze

starsoaked skins
shedding
in  lunar lulabye


Breeding concrete convictions
we stayed silent
the whole way home

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Copyright 2014 Rain In The Willows
Published on Monday, January 27, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Friday, July 14, 2017, worm (1194)By person wrote:

    I found this jewel clicking through random poems... Very Nice! ~worm~

  • megaprime81 On Sunday, March 23, 2014, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Impressive; short n' sweet, a beautiful write. 10

  • BetaWolfinVA On Tuesday, March 4, 2014, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    loved this, very well done :) Scholar

  • A former member wrote: My brother james(Dejected_Worth) told me to look you up and im so glad i did, this piece is very deserving of POTD. Thank you for gracing me with your well placed words. -Justin Craven (13JC) Scholar

  • hazydaisy On Wednesday, February 26, 2014, hazydaisy (132)By person wrote:

    i wish i could bookmark this. one of the best things i've read on here in the longest.

  • Leineco On Wednesday, February 26, 2014, Leineco (59)By person wrote:

    inexplicably compelling

  • A former member wrote: Ive come to find its those moments that "say" the most...

  • heroineyes On Monday, January 27, 2014, heroineyes (113)By person wrote:

    i loved the way you brought it home at the end...

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