Queen of Hearts

By Lost_Hope

Quite a nice castle of cards
Little Queen of hearts
With walls made of diamonds
And floors of clovers
I can't wait to see it falling apart

Your lovely blood red lips
Has let so many lies past your fangs
The whole kingom's fighting right before your glowing eyes
Yet they'll all stop to bow on their knees
You're up so high but still can't see a storm is coming

The waves will rise
And come crashing down
You're little house of cards wont stand a chance
The water will wash away the lies
And they'll all see the truth of what you are
You're not a Queen
You're a Joker with no heart

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Copyright 2014 Lost_Hope
Published on Thursday, January 16, 2014.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Bittersweetbedbyes On Saturday, March 22, 2014, Bittersweetbedbyes (24)By person wrote:

    I don't know what it is about this, but I really enjoyed reading this, very nicely written :) - BSBB

  • A former member wrote: Wow. That was awesome. Love how you use the suits of the deck throughout it. You said I could contact you but I don't know how.

  • soul_versing On Monday, January 20, 2014, soul_versing (1216)By person wrote:

    Imagery is everything when I read a poet and you drawn out a great deal here. Hello poet and welcome. Bows- Scholar

  • applecookies On Sunday, January 19, 2014, applecookies (33)By person wrote:

    Welcome to DP. I absolutely love your poem

  • Alchemist On Friday, January 17, 2014, Alchemist (873)By person wrote:

    Welcome to the Valley. The powers that be will always use a pair of clubs to beat the spade and then tell you the heart wasn't red when really it was only so they could keep the diamonds in their own hands.

  • PoetessDarkly On Thursday, January 16, 2014, PoetessDarkly (1023)By person wrote:

    beautiful, welcome to the darkness.

  • WillowGreybird On Thursday, January 16, 2014, WillowGreybird (30)By person wrote:

    Coming from a 'reformed' liar, I can say that it is rather difficult to get away with repeated offenses. The inspiration for this wonderful read, is certainly in for a tsunami of consequences.

  • poe_lover28 On Thursday, January 16, 2014, poe_lover28 (248)By person wrote:

    Absolutely loved it codykinz

  • candy meet baby On Thursday, January 16, 2014, candy meet baby (43)By person wrote:

    Very good poem. Fierce and dark, I like it. Thank you.

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