egress for slits .

By anaksunamun


The swarming sky sparrowed until day withered
until the statue tore out of its skin , blurted combing through the growls, the city was covered in sound

Inside me a silent. I slept through the stings


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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Saturday, January 11, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Cassette On Thursday, December 28, 2017, Cassette (1233)By person wrote:

    the way you play with words... oh man.

  • Alchemist On Saturday, April 26, 2014, Alchemist (868)By person wrote:

    The flow of this really does draw you between the lines. Now I have a chance to see its true beauty in the gaps.

  • Tonights Decision On Tuesday, February 25, 2014, Tonights Decision (141)By person wrote:

    sometimes.. when i daydream/half sleep on the buss in to the city, and something jolts me back, i feel the stings, in my face, on the back of my hands.. and im not sure where i am.. thanks for writing poetry that feels..

  • psychopath On Monday, February 24, 2014, psychopath (15)By person wrote:

    Its so vivid! :3

  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, February 19, 2014, FadedBlues (2965)By person wrote:

    ...I enjoy focusing on images you present, the individual parts that I see...

  • candy meet baby On Thursday, January 16, 2014, candy meet baby (43)By person wrote:

    Very inspiring. Good poem. Thank you

  • A former member wrote: your posts are difficult to stop reading. like compulsively massaging stems to feel their thorns.

  • hazydaisy On Saturday, January 11, 2014, hazydaisy (161)By person wrote:

    interesting. the last line was killer.

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