Lovely Roses
By DeepLoversPoet
Lay me down on a bed of roses,
with thorny stems and blushing bushes.
Lovely roses for all to see,
blushing, crisp, and falling out of season.
Roses keep fresh with water, dirt, stems, and stock.
keep them freshly trimmed.
Roses blush with pink and yellow,
stems are green and roots are killer.
Lovely roses with kiss's so sweet.
But thorns will prick soft lips of maidens
as lovers lay in their thorny beds.
Lovely roses are they so sweet?
Kissing crimson leaving bloody feet.
But those lovely roses smell so sweet.
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Copyright 2014 DeepLoversPoet
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On Saturday, March 29, 2014, haunted
(850) wrote:
this is so beautiful. the flow is outstanding in this. and yes roses have captured the hearts of many and even mended and melted many bleeding hearts. but i think the best way to enjoy them is to hang them upside down to dry and make them immortal for all to see. touch them up with some fabricated webs and you have a beautiful bunch of roses that take care of themselves. red roses turn to a very deep burgundy almost black hue. black roses were deemed as the kiss of death. it would be an honor to receive such sentiments. this is an outstanding poem, it really is. your talented as fuck and im liking it. awesome!
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2014, DeepLoversPoet
(50) wrote:
Thank you so much I worked hard on this one I took my time to post it. :)
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On Friday, January 10, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Ooh, I love it... This paints a pleasurable and painful scene all twisted into one thorny masterpiece :)~
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On Saturday, January 11, 2014, DeepLoversPoet
(50) wrote:
Thank you for commenting I'm glad you liked it.