DEATH SMILED :)

By infinitebeing

Little moments buried in monotony, the in between the lines i failed to see, subtle pleasantries eclipsed by indecency. My obsession with right now never left time for tomorrow. Always running from tomb stone prophecies searching for heaven on hells playground holding hands with enemies. Remember to breathe. I felt death under her shade but these tracks lead me home.

A manic hopefulness moves across my mood. Excited at the prospect i decided to believe. but the silk fingers of denial soon found their way around my throat, though i gave in quickly, still they squeezed. As fast as all seemed well i was on my knees...
i gave in and death smiled......

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Copyright 2013 infinitebeing
Published on Saturday, December 14, 2013.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • infinitebeing On Saturday, December 14, 2013, infinitebeing (80)By person wrote:

    THANK U ALL !!

  • infinitebeing On Saturday, December 14, 2013, infinitebeing (80)By person wrote:

    oooh yummy i love that i have mind provoked u that much my love :)

  • haunted On Saturday, December 14, 2013, haunted (850)By person wrote:

    oh my god, I cant say enough. this is really beautiful...*heart skips beat* this gives me an erection, sorry but I love it that much. your an excellent poet, and I wish I could be those delicious words you layed down. awesome pen dear.

  • megaprime81 On Saturday, December 14, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Wow! I love this write; 10

  • A former member wrote: Very intense.. and the last line, gives an eerie yet satisfying sense of closure to the struggle the character faces in this journey. Great write

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