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the snow melts where I walk
By Sketso
you may not see perfection,
or temporary brilliance,
but I've learned to take
one step at a time,
conquering through resilience.
consider it a bonus
for escaping a daily hell
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Copyright 2013 Sketso
Published on Wednesday, December 11, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
It's just a silly little short thing... perhaps it will expand some day. Or, perhaps it won't, as it says what I wanted to say.Awards
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On Sunday, November 20, 2016, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Great POTD and a wonderful succinct piece on dealing with tough times that just become part of your day to day living and any glimpse of relief never taken for granted. Top stuff.
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A former member wrote:
I really like this :)
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On Tuesday, January 7, 2014, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
well we know my sight is skewed so perfect is not perfect and brilliance is always touched with something another might not consider 'all that'.... in any case.... this is just right, with a few lefts and all a/round edged oh so well
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A former member wrote:
Ich mag es. . . I like it. Very motivational without the fluff- right to the point, and it was very clever of you to skip two lines between the "nce" rhyme to keep the direct, to-the-point message.
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On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, inhisbelly
(39) wrote:
I like the upbeat attitude of this. It is so nice to see someone realize their power. A succinct, effective write.
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On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
This is a poem that says a lot in a few words...sign of a genius at work. 10.
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On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Simply, yet powerfully put that is a bonus in my world :)~ nice inking
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