For: who its obviously for

By Dejected_Worth

Your words echo (1/16 tremolo)
.This is not an innuendo.
              This is an observation
About an angel.with broken wings
      And an open window/
but for the .most part. I love
      Loving you .without you knowing.

I smiled [watching you] climb up    
                               to be beneath me
and you can't deny .that we look good together.
            and i can keep you if I can catch you
                    But i can >not< keep you there
          But (you) .can be on top. 
                  If you prefer it .there.

And just so you know .This one. Is about you
     but that doesn't mean I'd tell you
Even if you asked me .but I kind of hope you ask me.
     And my pen echoes (1/16 tremolo)
But for the .most part. I love
       Loving you. without you knowing
  


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Copyright 2013 Dejected_Worth
Published on Wednesday, December 11, 2013.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I love it...

  • infinitebeing On Thursday, December 12, 2013, infinitebeing (80)By person wrote:

    beautifully woven write :)

  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    ...a snapshot that you keep in your favorite book of poetry. an affair for one...

  • inhisbelly On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, inhisbelly (39)By person wrote:

    What a sweet, complex longing this depicts. The internal struggle is so real and strong here. Captivating work as always.

  • blue angel On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    This reaches in nicely; wicked inking :)~

  • dwells On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Enigmatic and this relationship sounds like a real handful. To worship from afar perhaps and await a moment's weakness. Then more waiting while coming to terms with reality - you gotta be you too, cheers and much enjoyed DW!


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