Out Of Date.
By Magdalena
I fell silent in the depth
of your lost ambition
and the cold grew
as you
slipped through my fingers
hitting the bottom
of nowhere I wanted to stay
There was monotony
in the constant onslaught of pain
where it tongue tied itself around my heart
like repetitive rope
The gem that licked my soul
devalued as the sparkle dimmed
the edges were too abrasive
against my tenderness
kissed lips were never met on the ether
where our spirits would collide
Decline was inevitable
moments became harder to swallow
You reflect at times
in my window pane
as the rain hits hard
Grey eyes haunting and fathomless
framed with dark shadows and spider lashes
hair the colour of a Ravens wing
chiseled features that stole my breath
Dark clouds would braid through my emotions
with every tainted memory
my questions met hesitance
feeding the doubt rattling the cages of my mind
internal bleeding
slowly drained away my love
for you
from the first cut that you made
in my veiled heart
your tears
were only ever for your own emptiness
whenever clarity echoed
and even today
I don't think you realise
how much of my love you have lost.
Awards
Comments on "Out Of Date."
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A former member wrote:
I found this on the home page, and I can see why it's there. The bit about gray eyes and spider lashes: immaculate description. My compliments. :)
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On Monday, July 28, 2014, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
Thank you very much, it is appreciated... And thank you to whom it may concern for my POTD. :)
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A former member wrote:
just saw this, congrats on the POTD... it seems like you reached down into the darkest part of my own soul and wrote this from what I am feeling.. awesome work...
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On Monday, July 28, 2014, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
Ahhh, I imagine many can relate. Thank you :)
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On Monday, November 25, 2013, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...discontent is as cold as the winter wind, heartbreak makes walls of ice...
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On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
Indeed it does John. Thank you kindly.
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On Monday, November 25, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(275) wrote:
This is beautiful... The ending is perfect "I don't think you realize how much of my love you have lost"... Great write :)
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On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
Pleased you think so Caitlin. Thank you very much. :)
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On Monday, November 25, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
A heart of beauty taken for granted by calloused soul. Beautiful seasoned, yet painfully revealing poetry, my dear :)~
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On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
Thank you kindly Blue Angel, most appreciated. :)
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A former member wrote:
A beautiful and haunting heartache's elegy. I love the words you use. 10/10 to you
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On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
Most appreciated AnorexiKat. Thank you kindly.
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On Monday, November 25, 2013, haunted
(850) wrote:
this is really a good poem...I have spider lashes and ravens hair but im not out of date. haha lovely anita, just absolutely lovely dear. awesome!
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On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
You're definitely not out of date Todd lol. Thank you most kindly dear. :)
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A former member wrote:
seems like my ex wrote these words to me in her mind. wonderful poem. I feel this too much. I like it though.
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On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
Pleased you like. Thank you very much Heathen.