Reborn

By Sketso

trusting, when I've never trusted...
seeing what others can't see...
it's an odd feeling, this one,
a fighter's surrender

...and the one going down...

is me.


I let you inside this personal bubble,
and you hold my life in your hands.


then it comes...

confusion,
panic,
it's all closing in!

sinking,
DROWNING!



       ...free...

start again.

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Copyright 2013 Sketso
Published on Wednesday, November 20, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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Comments on "Reborn"

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  • A former member wrote: Very good work...

  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, November 20, 2013, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...good write. struggle gives way to acceptance...

  • Lady Poetry On Wednesday, November 20, 2013, Lady Poetry (38)By person wrote:

    Superb poem ,,,magnificent x

  • megaprime81 On Wednesday, November 20, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    I loved this...it reminded me of the music video for "Don't Cry" by GN'R, only in ways it was more than that.


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