Freak

By Xavier

For you look at me.
You just sit there and stare.
For I know what you are thinking of me.
You think I’m a freak to be looked at.
A freak that needs to be in a cage.
Something to see at a circus.
To be seen at a freak show.
For I look over at you,
and you look away.
For you think I did not see you look at me,
but I really did.
You look back and look me all over.
For you look at me
up,
down,
left,
and right.
For you look at me.
You think I’m a freak.
But think of this for one second.
To me you seem to be the freak.
For you
dress,
think,
and do things different than me.
So just think the way I think to truly see me.
Written By:
Xavier

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Copyright 2003 Xavier
Published on Friday, August 22, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Rebel_Angel On Monday, October 6, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I don't think your a freak! And I love the last line! Too many people are quick to judge. Very Good Write!...WRITE MORE!...lol

  • Aurora_Light On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    nice very nice

  • The_Scavenger On Monday, September 15, 2003, The_Scavenger (30)By person wrote:

    great write. that saying goes for our entire group. see ya at school pal and dont forget the can. We need a good chicogo hack going.

  • Six-Out On Friday, August 22, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    I think you're a freak, if I knew you, I could say I know! Or not.

  • eternal despair On Friday, August 22, 2003, eternal despair (66)By person wrote:

    i understand this write very much ive gone thro it... but i like being the freak in the story.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Friday, August 22, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Im thinking Korn.. And X-men.. Nice write, mister weelchair..

  • A former member wrote: Heh...i like that last line..."so just think the way I think to truly see me"...that's nice line...did you decorate that line yourself?

  • Crying_Banshee On Friday, August 22, 2003, Crying_Banshee (62)By person wrote:

    hehe..this used to happen to me...I just got used to it, and now I dont even notice anyone looking at me...because I'm not gonna change my style because some motherfuckers think I'm a weirdo...

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