October Rain

By Sketso

sultry morning with drizzle haze,
taunting, teasing of warmer days...

you catch me unaware

though the beauty you hold is grand,
I fail to see beyond the hand

gripping the steering wheel

rains are supposed to be cleansing,
yet the whole world seems dirty, today,
as if dying a pauper's death...

and this morning of mourning
should serve as a warning,
for this warm autumn storm
is working to form

that same familiar ache..........



I wish I knew the way out.

 

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Copyright 2013 Sketso
Published on Wednesday, October 30, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

...just dabbling with a feeling that I can't quite get to come out right... there is no purging today.
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  • worm On Tuesday, July 11, 2017, worm (1194)By person wrote:

    poetically graceful! Kudos! ~worm~

  • PoetessDarkly On Monday, November 11, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    simple and wonderfully written.

  • blue angel On Wednesday, October 30, 2013, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    Touches deeply, nice:)~

  • A former member wrote: " rains are supposed to be cleansing, yet the whole world seems dirty, today," The best lines from this verse, I likeed. Congrats WILLIAMSJI MAVELI


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