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Lost
By Aurora_Light
i'm lost in a world of noise
a place were quiet is but a dream
i'm lost in a world of silence
were my opinion is just a whim even to me
i'm lost in a world of blankness
were writing cant be done
i'm lost in a world of endless words
even the simplest of works can't be understood
i'm lost and i cant be found
even if my body is still here
i'm lost to the art i once loved
i cant read or write or help in anyway
cant someone come find me and show me the way?
i need a change but a change in what?
my friends my family my life my home?
i'm lost
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Copyright 2003 Amanda L. Mrozinski
Published on Wednesday, August 20, 2003.
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On Thursday, October 2, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240)
wrote:
I think you've placed a whole new definition to "lost". Very moving piece. You remind me of why we write. Your words hold beauty in truth, instead of lyrical fashion. I hope you are able to find the direction you need.
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A former member wrote:
if u r always feeling lost the take another look at your life and maybe u will realize that your not lost the world is. keep up the good work and keep writing from the heart
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On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Beautiful piece indeed...lost in a world of endless words... I like that.
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On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
quite beautiful indeed, but did you know that your works list is shaped like an arrow pointing up? ^-^ FYI! -Kryz
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On Tuesday, September 2, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
Don't know what to say. I hope you find a light to illuminate the way. We all get lost sometimes. Never give up.
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On Sunday, August 31, 2003, IceDragoness
(195) wrote:
I like how this goes from one thing to it's opposite in the next line, this definately conveys the feeling of being lost an awesome job I should've read this sooner I'm sorrie ~Dawn
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On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Admiting Your Lost Is Finding Your Way To Greatness... And Great You Are. This "OTHER" Write Was Very Good. Sincere And Respectful. Nice. GPhD.
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On Sunday, August 24, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Once again you speak the truth and simpleness of an endless writing maze...your words are definetly not lost from being wonderful.
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On Thursday, August 21, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Its Easy To Feel Overwhelmed... Its A Testament To Your Own Personal Glory To Succeed, And I Know The Answer. Great. GPhD.
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On Thursday, August 21, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
A poem that isnt lost. Now I wish I could come visit you so that we could inspire eachother. That Im sure we would. I hope you find a change in thoughts, in perspective soon. Maybe in a place you havnt looked. Things like that do happend.
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On Thursday, August 21, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
I could smell the poem. And it very well made. Great job Light. Tiger Love
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On Thursday, August 21, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
stop and really look at the world around you and tell yourself what you see in everything, I'm sure that inspiration will come out of something...don't focus on rhyming just on phrases at first...or find a magic map shop they always know the way
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On Thursday, August 21, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Lost is lost is lost... I'm currently at a stand still in my writting...it feels as if its all been said. Only change can help us find our way I suppose...I'm rambling. Anyhow...wonderful work I do concur!
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, Griffin
(114) wrote:
nice, no offence but spell check just on the basic things like cant instead of ant(i think its really supposed ot be can't but i dont care), i got it but it took me a second. im not sure if ur lost because u cant write, or lost just in general like opheli
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, Griffin
(114) wrote:
a said
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
very nice, sometimes we all feel lost,,,,,,,,,o,
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On Sunday, November 2, 2003, Storm
(143) wrote:
You've put words to the feeling of Lost. Easier to fight what you can define. Words well spoken.
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