fading seed

By sea of sorrow

new seed, hits the ground
with aspitrations, so profound
tower over, everything near
this little sprout, with no fear
bursting up, with new life
unexpecting, oncoming strife
world in reach, so high above
slowly chokes, the sun it loves
thou it fights, with all inside
no hope, to coincide
slowly decaying, it slither's forth
eyes always, looking north
there it rots, without a mention
never leaving, the slight indention
feeding, what tomorrow brings
the song, we all will sing

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Copyright 2013 sea of sorrow
Published on Saturday, August 17, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Loved it...

  • A former member wrote: this world is ruthless dog eat dog out there no exceptions that's life

  • Malice In Wonderland On Sunday, August 18, 2013, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    growing up is a bitch....physically and.mentally....we start out with dreams and intentions that are all to easy to let slip away... flow was lovely per usual :) Scholar

  • Void Vortex On Saturday, August 17, 2013, Void Vortex (303)By person wrote:

    Sad, but true in many ways. Nice!

  • blue angel On Saturday, August 17, 2013, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    This is deep in meaning. I love the perception of the saplings struggle in it's life span. Nicely written :)~ Thanks for sharing*

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