Gates of Fire

By DeafSoldier

I marched with my soldiers
Clad in bronze armor and our bronze shield
I proudly follow the descendent of Heracles
Standing guard at the narrow pass.

I follow the code
Of Spartan honor
And I do not back down
Standing guard at the narrow pass.

Wave after wave of numberless Immortals
But I shall not falter
Obey the Stoic code and my Spartan honor
Standing guard at the narrow pass.

As Euphrates leads them through the mountain
We stand and fight for our home
With Leonidas and the Spartans and Thespians
Along this pass, we make our final stand, our final hour.

"Go tell the Spartans,
Stranger passing by,
That here, obedient to Spartan law,
We lie."

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Copyright 2013 DeafSoldier
Published on Friday, August 16, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

The last four lines is the famous Epitaph of Simonides.
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  • Void Vortex On Sunday, August 18, 2013, Void Vortex (303)By person wrote:

    Your write gives me the feeling that you were/are a soldier, or have a stern strict personality. Nice piece; the life of a soldier!

  • DeafSoldier On Sunday, August 18, 2013, DeafSoldier (38)By person wrote:

    I'm not a soldier but I'm positive I was a soldier in a past life.

  • Killerdemonchick On Sunday, August 18, 2013, Killerdemonchick (54)By person wrote:

    Great work. I love it. Thankyou for sharing. :)

  • DeafSoldier On Sunday, August 18, 2013, DeafSoldier (38)By person wrote:

    Thanks (: It's about the Battle of Thermopylae.

  • FadedBlues On Friday, August 16, 2013, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    ...great write ,Soldier. put that final stanza in quotes, to present it properly...

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