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Lifeless
By Deathkitten
You lay inside a white casket
still & lifeless
Leaving us shocked, confused
& deprived
One million cries couldn't bring you back
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Author's Note:
Contest & Tribute to my classmate Porsche Cobb.Comments on "Lifeless"
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A former member wrote:
very to the point. i like it alot.
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A former member wrote:
Nothing knocks the breath out of you quite as much as losing someone you care for, I am sorry for your loss.
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On Sunday, August 11, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334)
wrote:
Beautiful tribute.... Losing someone is always hard, and i think she'd have loved this ♥ Good luck on the contest xoxo
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On Sunday, August 11, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thank you, sweetness :) oxox
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On Friday, August 9, 2013, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...sorrow is a veil over beauty, a delicate shroud. your poem is a passionate memorial...
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On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thanks for your kind words, Faded :)
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On Friday, August 9, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(275) wrote:
This is so sad, It really pulls the emotion out of me, lovely piece..
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On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thank you so much :)
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On Friday, August 9, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Powerful and a lovely tribute, she was a very beautiful girl. This makes my heart ache for you; Good luck ~ It's a winner ;)~ ~*_*~
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On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
I brokedown last night & decided to let a little of it out. Thank you, beautiful :)
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A former member wrote:
I like this poem it really makes you think about death and losing a loved one I also like the form to the point not wordy great read
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On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Those were my intentions. Thank you so much :)
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A former member wrote:
nice illustrations you used I like the line one millions cries couldn't bring you back
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