Red antlers

By Dancing_Monkey

Claire, Lust and franchise soon to be bottled, striking down a chord   

"My enormity values only virgin flesh." Heartfelt release, birthmark fear 

Damnable detailed imagination; Pondering monsters in the night. 

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Copyright 2013 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Tuesday, August 6, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Drea On Wednesday, January 10, 2018, Drea (1508)By person wrote:

    *leaves an offering of pixie dust *

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, January 26, 2014, carlosjackal (2576)By person wrote:

    Still delicious..A veritable treat of the mind.

  • CharlottesWeb On Monday, November 4, 2013, CharlottesWeb (521)By person wrote:

    I picture you in bed, hands behind head with this cloud of thought/emotion/action/imagination filling your room, streaming out an open window. And then....all at once the words for this poem come out and the cloud siphons at the speed of the night into the invisible words lingering over your lips. I smoked I'd need a cigarette ;)

  • blue angel On Monday, September 30, 2013, blue angel (1115)By person wrote:

    Congratulations :)~ Seriously worthy, Brilliantly done*

  • Solace On Sunday, September 22, 2013, Solace (1081)By person wrote:

    You won't get this reference likely - reminds me of a Tim Winton short story in his "the turning" collection" it has the same thrust to it - the same effecting stare.

  • Tonights Decision On Sunday, August 25, 2013, Tonights Decision (141)By person wrote:

    im watching the Hannibal tv series at the moment, this poem gives me the same dreamy atmospheric feel as the the show does. a worthy winner, it was a tough one with a lot of restrictions.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, August 27, 2013, Dancing_Monkey (1288)By person wrote:

    I can relate to that, having seen all of the series aswell . Ty

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, August 22, 2013, carlosjackal (2576)By person wrote:

    A worthy winner..Nice one , Peter.

  • NarcissusNarcosis On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis (168)By person wrote:

    Another poetic write... I like your usage of quotes in your work, well placed and nicely accentuates lines coming from another..."..heartfelt release, birthmark fear.." You make a deep impact with few words...great post, much enjoyed -NN

  • PoetessDarkly On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, PoetessDarkly (1005)By person wrote:

    awesome. great pen

  • dwells On Tuesday, August 6, 2013, dwells (5703)By person wrote:

    Birthmarks and demons, the stuff of the anointed and the haunted, cheers DM!

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