exhale
By Nehema
Garbage day, taken away, released under the full moon, as I prayed
Emerging onto a new stage, refreshed, unrestrained, discernable and untamed
Forgiving the unforgivable, retrieving meaning for the grieving
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Copyright 2013 Nehema
Published on Friday, August 2, 2013.
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, FadedBlues
(2172) wrote:
...it's a daring ritual, like emerging from a cocoon...
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Mmm.. Who doesn't love taking out the trash.. "Forgiving the unforgivable" this is powerful Robyn. Awesome write! I love you doll. Bows-
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Devilish
(2662) wrote:
Nice!! Are you getting your rhyme scheme down to a t or what? lil dick. lol love you ..
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(615) wrote:
Nice N, I wish I could do just what you said. Starting over is hard 'n heavy, but so well worth it. That was a nice one. Sweet. Til next time -
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
I really love this !! To start anew! Refreshing write, my dear ;)~
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
'Forgiving the unforgivable, retrieving meaning for the grieving " I loved those last lines... beautifully written, and very unique structure :) xoxo
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis
(94) wrote:
Very awesome..I like the way you structured this; this style, where each stanza can stand alone, but also goes together with the others as a whole-you pulled it off nicely. Haven't seen this type of poem in awhile...those last words, "retrieving meaning for the grieving", have an awesome rhyme...interesting and deep, to be so short; great post! -NN
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On Saturday, August 10, 2013, Nehema
(962) wrote:
Yeah, I was intrigued by the challenge. I'm glad you think I pulled it off, I never can tell...lol *licks my baby* - XXOO