exhale

By Nehema

Garbage day, taken away, released under the full moon, as I prayed

Emerging onto a new stage, refreshed, unrestrained, discernable and untamed

Forgiving the unforgivable, retrieving meaning for the grieving


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Copyright 2013 Nehema
Published on Friday, August 2, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • FadedBlues On Saturday, August 3, 2013, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...it's a daring ritual, like emerging from a cocoon...

  • soul_versing On Saturday, August 3, 2013, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    Mmm.. Who doesn't love taking out the trash.. "Forgiving the unforgivable" this is powerful Robyn. Awesome write! I love you doll. Bows- Scholar

  • Devilish On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Nice!! Are you getting your rhyme scheme down to a t or what? lil dick. lol love you .. Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Friday, August 2, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (615)By person wrote:

    Nice N, I wish I could do just what you said. Starting over is hard 'n heavy, but so well worth it. That was a nice one. Sweet. Til next time -

  • blue angel On Friday, August 2, 2013, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    I really love this !! To start anew! Refreshing write, my dear ;)~

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Friday, August 2, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    'Forgiving the unforgivable, retrieving meaning for the grieving " I loved those last lines... beautifully written, and very unique structure :) xoxo

  • NarcissusNarcosis On Friday, August 2, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis (94)By person wrote:

    Very awesome..I like the way you structured this; this style, where each stanza can stand alone, but also goes together with the others as a whole-you pulled it off nicely. Haven't seen this type of poem in awhile...those last words, "retrieving meaning for the grieving", have an awesome rhyme...interesting and deep, to be so short; great post! -NN

  • Nehema On Saturday, August 10, 2013, Nehema (962)By person wrote:

    Yeah, I was intrigued by the challenge. I'm glad you think I pulled it off, I never can tell...lol *licks my baby* - XXOO Scholar

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