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5 AM Thoughts
By Chalin
take everything
i offer.
my hands burn
from the weight.
wait for
all you want,
forget about your
promises and
Possiblities;
days count down,
waiting for a decision.
you could come home.
i won't expect
your presence to
alter the balance
all you want is
to see my bruised
naked body sobbing
for your touch.
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Copyright 2003 Chalin
Published on Monday, August 18, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "5 AM Thoughts"
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On Saturday, March 4, 2006, Thorn
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wrote:
There's something about being awake in the early morning hours that seems to spark poetic inspiration... Very nice write.
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On Friday, June 18, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
a certain degree of pain...depth and meaning..excellent write. -MeL-
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On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, Chameleon
(111) wrote:
I really liked this piece, too. It is simple yet has so many avenues. The last stanza is great.
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On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Poignant and frantic, pulling he reader ever further down into its maze of meaning and possibilities, excellent. ~ mw
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On Friday, August 22, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Too many directions this one could veer off into. I will speak of the first one I ran...even though I might be totally off. I thought resigned...giving in and in a way...liking it. Enjoyed this. :)
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A former member wrote:
Sounds like giving in. This...touches me. Saddens me.
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On Monday, August 18, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
melancholy, almost resigned... this is a weighty piece...
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