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Unspeakable
By Intoxicating Delirium
Conceived not from love but,
Of grief stricken codependence, an unattainable addiction.
There is no atonement in store,
My decision exuding affliction.
This irreplaceable life… will inevitably devour my entirety.
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Copyright 2013 caitlinryen
Published on Tuesday, July 30, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
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On Tuesday, January 14, 2014, Numbers Peppelini
(76)
wrote:
I found this here. A brief respite perhaps from the wild coyote emptying his loneliness and longing to the sky. No one comes ....nothing is changed....lonely heart sleeps as is.....I better be going.
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A former member wrote:
This makes me wonder, can you go the opposite way? Like a magnet gone negative to negative? Can you instead "devour" "this irreplaceable life"?
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A former member wrote:
Deep expression with an attention demanding message.
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A former member wrote:
good write :)
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On Wednesday, October 16, 2013, Scorpio999
(52) wrote:
ever deeper into human life ... now here is here .. now here .. and so it goes ..
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On Tuesday, August 20, 2013, Void Vortex
(303) wrote:
Yo caitlinryen, superb job! Know exactly what you mean, a topic very hard to put into words.
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On Thursday, August 15, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Nicely written: The chosen path that devours our steps.... Love it*
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On Tuesday, August 13, 2013, Scarrzz
(238) wrote:
I wonder, if you recall, was your mental state when you wrote this somewhat disconnected from the world around you? It seems like you were exploring the inner parts you your soul and just jotting down what you felt along the path. I do love it when words come from such a deep place that they feel like an image of what is inside. I particularly like that the perspective seems to be that of an outsider looking inward. If you did that on purpose, you're a genius, and if it just happened, bravo for being so expressive. ~ By the way, I do hope you're wrong about that last line.
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
It happens to be so true hah well said & much enjoyed! Good luck :)
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, darkheartmagic
(82) wrote:
So much meaning in very few words but I wouldn't change on line out standing work.
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On Monday, August 5, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(275) wrote:
Thank you everyone for the wonderful comments :)
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A former member wrote:
a short one..but left with something to ponder upon..your writing speaks in amazing ways..this is beautiful..thanks for sharing
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...fate so speaks of dread here, that it should remain mute...
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On Tuesday, August 13, 2013, Scarrzz
(238) wrote:
Yes, well put, Faded.
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On Thursday, August 1, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
A taste of affliction :) Well put !!
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On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
Well done ^.^ Good luck! xoxo
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On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
That is the burden women bear, and the children make us immortal. Well-said with few words and best of luck CR!
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