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Afflicted
By Nehema
Destroyed
Utterly
The desire
Still alive
Can't escape
Don't wanna try
Afflicted
Unscripted
Conflicted
Predicted
Addicted
Restricted
Laughing at my
Nievity
Brevity
Levity
Fool me once...
To lost
To be shamed
Hoping to be
Reclaimed
Defamed
Unrestrained
...blamed...
Emotion so strong
How can it be wrong
Craving
His song
Slaving
Engraving
My heart
Raving
Braving
Knowing
Caving
To him I belong
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Copyright 2013 Nehema
Author's Note:
...guess who's back...Comments on "Afflicted "
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A former member wrote:
The flow almost grabs you by the neck and forces your eyes to keep scrolling down... yet it still radiates a certain vulnerability; such a delightful contradiction. And the rhymes enhance the rhythm in a delightful way. Succinct and straight to the point. A very nice read, many thanks for sharing.
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On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, Ortolan
(214)
wrote:
Excellent rhythm and rhyming.I enjoy poems that are colorful and easy to read.The emotion, or impression I should say, comes through very clearly.Thank you for writing.
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A former member wrote:
That was beautiful, and the rythm flowed well, very interesting too!
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A former member wrote:
This is really beautiful, so good!
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On Monday, June 10, 2013, Star
(920) wrote:
this is beautiful, the rhyme scheme is utterly amazing. you're brilliant.. (:
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On Saturday, June 8, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
Looks like we came back around the same time heh. This was brilliant, the rhyming flawless. Welcome back xoxo
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A former member wrote:
the problem with really knowing is you gotta jump first... could be pillows and fluffy things, could be pavement and broken glass... a lot of heart is felt through this...
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On Tuesday, June 4, 2013, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Yeah, I'm praying for pillows, but wearing my safety helmet and smiling on the way down :). The safety helmet is really just for looks as its a looong fall. Love you J, thanks for your friendship and support - XXOO
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On Sunday, June 2, 2013, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...your poem is a long ladder to love. it's a hard climb, Robyn, we've all been there...
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On Sunday, June 2, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Only Horton knows for sure, give him a face full of forgiveness and soldier on baby girl - always the best!
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On Sunday, June 2, 2013, Electric-Chair
(122) wrote:
Very clever write, great use of words and I love the way it ended
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On Sunday, June 2, 2013, haunted
(850) wrote:
hmm I can take a wild guess at whos back maybe. really good poem very smooth flow and the style is really cool. I love this poem it just fits and lines up perfectly sentence after sentence. awesome robyn!
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On Friday, June 7, 2013, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Yeah, you know. I guess I should let others know who it isn't, but after some reflection I think its more fun this way - XXOO
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On Sunday, June 2, 2013, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Absolutely amazingly brilliantly poetic perfection.. i am so proud of this piece ill fav it.. beautiful. i'm hard as a fucking rock.
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On Friday, June 7, 2013, Nehema
(960) wrote:
I love you, the support you give to us all... Not sure I'd still be here without it. Now some will really hate you, haha - XXOO
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