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Black-blooded
By Deathkitten
Is it me there
in your pretty little rhyparography?
Seems you had a few misstrokes
while constructing my sordidness
Impress us with your erudition
Your blind ambitions
Your self-conditioned
moral mended
knowledge blending
form
can't create
nor imitate
anything of the scorned
I'm black-blooded
and so you've been warned
but your high-class ignorance
keeps you on your toes
while i'm flat-footed
and surrounded by your friendly foes
The crows
And you...
just keep flipping pages
scrolling for ages
searching for traces
and answers
in which
you cannot learn
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Thursday, May 30, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
To each their own ;)Comments on "Black-blooded"
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On Tuesday, June 4, 2013, dwells
(4285)
wrote:
Just catching up today and this was epic! I had to look up that "rhyparography" word - a new one for me yet so meaningful in context. Much enjoyed the intellectual vitriol, thanks Jess!
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On Tuesday, June 4, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thankies! It has a sarcastic undertone, but then again...I think I do that alot.
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On Saturday, June 1, 2013, Melancholic VIncent
(430) wrote:
Marvelous thing..... "surrounded by your friendly foes" that's a sweet piece. Congrats for your writing skills!
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On Saturday, June 1, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Haha thank you :)
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A former member wrote:
Such a smart little kitty. God damn your brilliance makes me hurl (in a good way). I love it!
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On Saturday, June 1, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Hurl? Lmfao you sick bitch. I think i'm beginning to like you.
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On Saturday, June 1, 2013, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
I think Shakespeare coined the word hot/cold-blooded, so I guess you can take this credit for black blooded. The crows line made me think of Game of Thrones and the whole work is incredibly scornful but still a joy to read. Thanks Kitten.
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On Saturday, June 1, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Well thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)
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A former member wrote:
Another amazing write, as usual.
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On Friday, May 31, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Aww thanks, Beautiful :)
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A former member wrote:
Read a lot of books in my life, but I whole-heartedly agree that in real life what they teach is less than useless, simply read for personal enjoyment. I'll rely on instinct and experience always.
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On Friday, May 31, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Very good, and that's the point I was making. Reading helps enhance the mind, but it's not the answer for all nor any handbook/guidleline for real life. Thanks
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A former member wrote:
Most of the time, I come here to read poems. Sometimes I come here just to let you know that I'm thinking about you. Have a beautiful Friday!
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On Friday, May 31, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thinking about me? Hmm...what about me *grins*
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A former member wrote:
Wishing you a weekend of calmness and clarity, imagination and wonder, love and light. Cheers!
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On Thursday, May 30, 2013, haunted
(850) wrote:
well im no book worm nor do I care to be. I get by with what I know but still there are others who flex their brainy muscles to show their intelligence....to each their own! awesome jess!
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On Thursday, May 30, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Very many, i'm not totally bashing bookworms here, but there are some things...books just cannot teach us. Flex away ;)
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