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I hope you don't care
By Deathkitten
Come out
Come out
wherever you are
I don't have to see you
to know you're not far
You're always hovering
or is it me?
Ooh, tons of questions
Hmm...ya got me!
I feel your touch
you chill me to the bone
Although I don't mind
You don't have to leave me alone
I feel your cold, blank stare
An awkward moment
I can't compare
but I know you're there
Whether you ever notice
Whether I decide to share
I hope you don't care
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Saturday, May 25, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, May 28, 2013, Ortolan
(214)
wrote:
I read it because I liked the title...I hope that too very often, only I am the ghost myself usually.Sometimes I think we all might be.
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On Sunday, May 26, 2013, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
i hate when i know its there and it doesnt wanna come out.. i can see it i can smell it i can taste it .. but its eluding me..
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On Sunday, May 26, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Mmhmmm haha! Mwah
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A former member wrote:
Aha the search is all the fun, whether the game is won or lost is of little consequence. But what to do when you find the poltergeist? Mine are all in my head, so I never had to search for them. Interesting to say the least.
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On Sunday, May 26, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Hmm tricky tricky! Could be all in my head. Never know ;)
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A former member wrote:
Marco? POLO! Ha! Well, if one were to take a look at my time here on DP, one could possibly draw the conclusion that I am playing Hide N Seek, but that isn't the case. Basically, with two jobs taking up the majority of my days, my computer time is limited to about an hour in the mornings. Sometimes less. I've decided to share that time by coming here to support the poets and leaving a few comments. I wish I could read everything, but time just doesn't allow for it. I truly hope that no one gets offended if I don't leave a comment. It's not at all that I don't care. Anyways, I really like the playful tone of your piece. Nicely done.
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On Sunday, May 26, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thank you! I don't take offense to poets on DP not commenting or being on. Everyone has a life outside of this. One may think I am playing peek-a-boo, but I never stay on for hours. I kinda just login & out to read, or post comments on things I like & go. Same with FB. Well, i'm on here more than Facebook. Used to be the other way around. I just find it more interesting here. Thanks for commenting!
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On Sunday, May 26, 2013, haunted
(850) wrote:
hmm a good game of peek-a-boo sounds fun except when the face your used to seeing is suddenly death warmed over and the person you do see, is you! like a reflection! true story for me. scary as hell. but I like your poem the paranormal is a fascinating topic for me and in poetry its another fave of mine. excellent jess! awesome!
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On Sunday, May 26, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Peek-a-boo can be fun for alil while. Paranormal hehehe yes...it is definitely fascinating to say the least. Thank you!
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