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Crumbling the Page
By Deathkitten
What's the use
in hating someone
you don't even know?
Why take things so personal?
Should you avoid someone
that doesn't hate you?
Are innocent strangers
so intimidating to you?
Why must one bother
to spew blank rage?
It's like writing nothing
and crumbling the page
What for?
It was perfectly fine
until your mind starts playing tricks
and your heart's in a bind
There are several ways to look at it
but you can't see it for what it is
Your head is so far up your ass
All you feel is your fart's fizz
but it's all well and fine by me
I don't care either way
You can make yourself the fool
I don't need your time of day
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Thursday, May 23, 2013.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Crumbling the Page"
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A former member wrote:
Hmm. I've tried a few times to comment on this one, but so far it hasn't come out sounding like I want it to sound. I think I keep getting sidetracked by "fart's fizz." Ha! Happy Memorial Day Weekend! The summer unofficially starts now...
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, haunted
(850)
wrote:
you are the best when it comes to letting it all hang out and I love your attitude that's laid back and casual through a tornado of emotions being thrown out there. your assertive and I like that jess! you made some strong points in here about wasting time worrying. your the best and I love your poetry babe. awesome!
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
That is me. I will lay it on the line in a fashionable manner. I am full of emotion & have learned to express it in different ways. Thank you Todd :)
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A former member wrote:
Aha I loved this, and I really wish I could live by it too, unfortunately my temper gets the best of me far too often, sometimes people say something that is so stupid I just can't seem to let it drop. Doesn't help that I got 5 people in my head that aren't particularly helpful in this regard either ;) Excellent write though, much enjoyed.
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Well, there are times where I will flip shit & plenty times I can play it cool, but actually hating someone or using that term against someone you don't even know, while assuming or even for the mere hell of it because you're pissed or jealous...I think it's a bit much. You can be pissed without hating someone. You can have conflict without hate, and that's what I don't get about people. I hate very few people. I dislike many, I love very few, like many...and the rest I don't really care. To each their own though. It's good to be hated sometimes...and for no good reason. Thanks Red!
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A former member wrote:
Hmmm excellent point, I'm the same way, I hate very, very few people, if I ever came face to face with them, I genuinely think I'd go straight for the kill.
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
The only fresh air some get is their flatulence - hey maybe that's why they only eat beans, and brussel sprouts, and cabbage! (sounds like a Vegan to me) - cheers and you just keep getting better!
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Haha hey now...i'm practically vegetarian...except for the occasional shellfish/fish & poultry. That is too fucking funny! Thanks Dan :)
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
I am going to tie you up and put my fingers in your mouth.. then we shall marry by blood.. mmmmmmm... blood.,...
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
You will have my blood-- Very soon, but only if you're a good little demon ;)
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Hmm I got a bone to pick with you.
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Deviated09
(90) wrote:
Well I enjoyed this write. Reminds me of a couple people all too well..
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thanks D. Same here. Humans! Bah..
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