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Maggot-Go-Round.
By Strataic
She--
Was Hal-f-
Torn.
When carousel
Cabinets; whirled
Ferociously around.
A mouse-
Of maggot--butterflies.
It seethes here...
She-- was just-
Rustling, her carrier-bag.
Weeps.
From useable filaments.
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Copyright 2013 Cipher
Published on Friday, May 17, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, November 3, 2017, Cassette
(1144)
wrote:
I actually felt that the hyphens didn't work for me. I found myself over enunciating... like "hal-eff", reading it as two separate words. I feel that there's too many hyphenations. I think the line breaks would be sufficient, sans hyphens.
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On Monday, August 5, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis
(94) wrote:
Your structuring style lends well to this piece. The hyphenations help accentuate certain parts, 'Hal-f- Torn'...I like it, your writing is interesting and original. Poetic work here, cool post -NN
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