She Has Fallen
By XxxHauntxxxMexxX
He Strikes Her Like A Cobra Attacking Its Prey
It's So Easy For
Him As She Is Small And Fragile
He's A Monster In Her Eyes
With Fangs And Wings
Feeding On Her Fear Of Him
He Attacks
Without Remorse
His Eyes Beaming As Red As The Wound Afflicted
On Her Delicate Pale White Skin
He Works Her Into A Corner
She Hugs Herself Because She Knows No One Will Hear Her Scream
If
They Do They'll Do Nothing
This Happens Almost Nightly
He
Hits The Bottle
Then Her
But Tonight Was Different
His Rage Seemed More Venomous
Ever Strike Stinging With More
Of A Bite Then The One Before It
In All The Years She Had Been
With Him Tonight It Would All End
Her Face Is Bleeding Now
Coated In Her Own Crimson Liqiud
She Starts To Cry And Thinks
To Herself
Tonights The Night
Tonight I Will Be Free
He
Grabs The Back Of Her Hair And Starts To Drag Her By It
Pulling
Harder And Thrusting Her Tiny Body Into The Trunk
She Knows Not
To Scream
Hes Trained Her To Well For It
It Seems Like
Hours Go By In The Trunk Of His Crap Car
He Finally Stops
He Pops The Trunk And Drags Her Out
He Puts Her On Her Knees
Tears Start To Flow
But Not Out Of Fear
But Of Joy Her
Nightmare Would Finally Be Over
He Puts The Gun To Her Head And
Pulls The Trigger
She Falls To The Ground In A Pool Of Blood And
Brain Matter
She Has Fallen
But Yet She At Last
Is
Free
Comments on "She Has Fallen"
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On Sunday, July 7, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis
(94) wrote:
she has fallen, but at last, is free....wow...I am in awe of this...deep...well-crafted...worded perfectly...flowing flawlessly...how do I compliment this..? I'll have to come back to it to truly express how great this is...amazing...
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On Friday, May 17, 2013, Melancholic VIncent
(431) wrote:
Your father....? Is he in the center of this? I can feel your despair..... It's something so familiar to you.... I can see it.
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On Sunday, May 12, 2013, FadedBlues
(2172) wrote:
..that's tragic, beginning to end. too real...
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On Saturday, May 11, 2013, Star
(920) wrote:
damn, tragic. and yeah, i can understand the way she is thinking in the end... great work (:
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On Saturday, May 11, 2013, XxxHauntxxxMexxX
(7) wrote:
Thank You! I Appreciate Your Input And Your Compliments To My Work So Far :)