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Kissed at the seal
By Deathkitten
A stare in use; the rod & reel
Conveying more than words ever will
A gentle caress of the electric eel
A heart warming & soothing feel
Where blood pressure rises until
there's no more time to kill
No stones to throw or cards to deal
A blank letter, inside envelope; kissed at the seal
In such nature; sending a shiver & chill
From the depths of forever & free will
Only noticing once I fray & frill
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Saturday, April 27, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, April 29, 2013, haunted
(849)
wrote:
i sense lots of metaphores and i cant quiet put my finger on it just yet. but its got me thinking and i love reading between the lines. awesome!
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On Monday, April 29, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
You are correct! This one is a little tricky ;)
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On Sunday, April 28, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Going fishing myself this morning. Saw the electric eels on River Monsters last week, but this sounds to me like maybe electro-shock therapy slang? Catching just a hint of meaning from each line as the momentum picked me up and carried me along, what a rush! Thanks DK, one of your best!
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On Sunday, April 28, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
You're onto me! Haha well....something like that. Definitely not a literal piece. I am glad you like it.
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On Sunday, April 28, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
I love to fish! though, in all sincerity I would have a heart attack if I caught an eel! lol Awesome write! Sometimes when I read your work I am at loss for an appropriate adjective, so please forgive me if my comments seem trite and over used. :) I do truly believe you are too good not to be published!
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On Sunday, April 28, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
No need to worry over words. I wish I could be published, however, I feel i'm not worthy of such (just yet). Thank you for the compliment!
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