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Trance
By Clydes_Bonnie
Bare forests
blue skies
and a setting sun..
holding my eyes
hostage, as
my mind swirls aimlessly
Suppressed
never touching promise
never feeling fear
although, I
cant
I cant even hear the silence in my ears
If asked what I
was thinking
Blank stare
I would speak of nothings
while slipping back into everything that
lives without words, that
lives without feeling
Trance
waiting for the sun
to set
so I can breath again
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Copyright 2013 Clydes_Bonnie
Published on Monday, April 22, 2013.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Trance"
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A former member wrote:
I like how you constructed this thought. There is a trance-like quality. I love the word "hostage", & am always searching for an excuse to nab a few. It's a fun game. There is another life to begin with each dawn, perhaps. Thanks for the words, Clydes.
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On Tuesday, April 23, 2013, FadedBlues
(2169)
wrote:
...captivating reading. free of the prison of flesh, out of body...
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On Tuesday, April 23, 2013, Electric-Chair
(122) wrote:
Awesome, descriptive words captivating
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A former member wrote:
This is all too familiar. Awesome description!
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