Frankenstein's poem
By FadedBlues
the monster & his daughter Janey walked into their gingerbread house. she was coming home from school, he was returning from another day on the job: frightening villagers.
‘did your mom get milk?’ the monster asked.
‘did you get milk?!’ Janey yelled. ‘yes!’ came the shout.
‘yes.’ said Janey. the monster sat at the table while Janey poured the milk. they had cookies, too. Oreos.
‘I’m really getting tired of tramping around, scaring kids all the time.’ the monster said. ‘I think I’m getting too old for this.’
for a moment, the monster was lost in his sadness.
‘anyway, I wrote a poem.’
‘tell me your poem, Dad.’ Janey said, like a good daughter.
the monster recited his poem.
the sun is shining
and the daisies are in bloom
so why am I
so full of gloom?
frightening villagers
is the job that I’ve got.
but I want to be the guy
that I am not.
so I lie in the shade
of the apple tree
and dream about
a different me.
‘that’s pretty, Dad.’ Janey said, & the monster smiled his cracked smile.‘but Dad,’ Janey continued, ‘you are what you are.’
‘you can’t change that.’
so the monster finished his milk, feeling even gloomier. The End.
Comments on "Frankenstein's poem"
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On Sunday, April 21, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
Aww. If Frankenstein had gone on to have children, he would indeed feel like this. Unconditional love of the child...... That is the real message being portrayed here, to me. X x
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On Friday, April 19, 2013, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
Kristie, Mirna, Ruby, thanks for peeking in on my sad monster...
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On Wednesday, April 17, 2013, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
simply sad and beautiful. What a story, that of the monster...
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On Wednesday, April 17, 2013, M Morgan
(198) wrote:
Poeta, if envy kill I'd be dead!!! Bold, beautiful, touching Oh! How could you do that?
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A former member wrote:
my favorite part of the film... of most any film... So human and childlike his face... Their mutual understanding and innocence... as if he grew a soul, sprouted up like a daisy... much to the doctor's disnay. i feel like the monster sonetimes... and frankenstein was my mother...Poor tortured soul. i love this. i love you for this... cookies and milk are partnered with so many intimate, cherishable moments. the little girl's wisdom is so keen and accurate... their unjaded eyes show us... Teach us... you have such vision. thank you for this... so much.