fraudulent asterisms

By Corinthian





















like thrush mouths

you are lice in my skull


Attentioning
to
Exist




sob
sob
sob



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pipistrelle
heartbeat











Engouled.
your minds are banal and broken

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Copyright 2013 Corinthian
Published on Wednesday, March 20, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Poetic-Realm On Wednesday, March 27, 2013, Poetic-Realm (258)By person wrote:

    Ouch.... hope you included me.

  • BetaWolfinVA On Wednesday, March 20, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    ohh wow... your poetry is amazing for one who grows up with english as a tool... for an acquired tool, its astounding Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, March 20, 2013, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...even as you scold, your fiery tongue shouts a poem. we are elegantly berated...

  • haunted On Wednesday, March 20, 2013, haunted (851)By person wrote:

    like thrush mouths you are lice in my skull...thats awesome and damn, really inspiring i could write about the seed planted on that verse. although i dont know exactly what your message is here. it doesnt matter because your poem from what i do understand is despiteful in true cori fashion. excellent!

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