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Five Miles from Happiness
By BetaWolfinVA
A work inspired by Exhaled Exultations
on great eloquence much depends,
simple words more warming than a
blanket,
and their absense more chilling than ice
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I
was five miles from happiness
as the center of my universe drove
passed work and house on I nine-five
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while i was waiting
for my food
staying off the road so i could not see
her, that
is/was my one true love
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i take the taco bell home to
one
i am still bound to in lonelienss
shaken, sleepless, dreaming of
her
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Copyright 2013 HHMCameron
Author's Note:
my love asked me when i was leaving work... she wanted to know because she was passing through my commuting zone...Comments on "Five Miles from Happiness"
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A former member wrote:
an emptiness that so wants to be filled.. releates to as all in a certain kinda way.
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On Sunday, April 7, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
Thank you, glad that you enjoyed it..
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A former member wrote:
They say that most accidents happen within five miles from home. Nice depiction of the loneliness, Cameron.
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On Thursday, March 21, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
it is hard to wonder if you want someone to want to see you.... or if you don't so hard to know...
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