Thinking

By asailorsangel

Today I could here you thinking
what I was feeling
Today I saw you in the back
of my thoughts
Today I knew that you would
always be in my heart
Today I want you to know
that what I felt
was you
turn away

Yesterday I let go of the thought of
you and tomorrow I will learn that
today was nothing but a broken heart...

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Published on Monday, November 18, 2002.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I liked this, it does hold a certain meaning to me

  • A former member wrote: damn i understand what you are going threw or writting about

  • A former member wrote: This could make my veins stop pumping blood,it's just so meaningful to me,simplicty even in poetry can just bring out the worst in you,which brings out the best in the poetry itself.

  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, February 21, 2004, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I like this!

  • A former member wrote: uh....yes....very powerful words to me...touched me...greatly written...i really truly liked it...went on my favs...

  • A former member wrote: Wow I've thought those thoughts almost every day of my life so this one really hits close to home. I really enjoyed it. ~Urban Shipwreck~

  • A former member wrote: I like this peom. Good write.

  • A former member wrote: poem*

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