Meeting on a Bridge
By BetaWolfinVA
it is an earlier time
when good wood and stone
were the
body and soul of human dwellings
i am a young poet,
walking
in the woods towards
a wooden bridge,
i see three men of
my acquaintance at the mid point
i know them as the brothers of
Raven,
a Dark Auburn haired rubenesque maiden of green eyes and flashing
intelligence that has, of late, enflamed my heart and soul
I am on
the way to meet her,
and our relationship was quite cordial 'ere-now
i give them a hail and well met,
they do not respond in quite the same way
While acknowledging that she is the one in control,
They tell me that i need to leave Raven alone,
I tell them that,
i cannot, in good conscience accede to their demands.
It is up and over the side then, as i am thrown.
the landing is less than spectacular,
as i dash my head on a stone
The last sight that i see is a vision
of Dark Auburn hair and Green Eyes.
as i find my way to another bridge
------------------------------------------------
vast time and lives
later,
i am wondering if they were not,
quite, her brothers
and were just no longer willing to share?
and was their intent to
scare or kill?
I think that i had the first version of this dream
shortly after i met her...
it is probably what told me that i would
never have her all to my self,
and would always need to be willing
to share...
or maybe it was just that i was already reading perilous
waters.
Author's Note:
A dream that i had for the first time shortly after i met raven, in august i had it again, and wrote thisComments on "Meeting on a Bridge"
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On Sunday, February 17, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Interesting and I noticed the older posted date, suspect you might have added the last stanza lately? Cheers! And your readiness to share her might be a silent proclamation to your present condition, or to say another way "I too will be shared by the ladies".
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On Sunday, February 17, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
what y failed attemts at monogomy tell me is that i have room in my heart for raven and someone else, or only raven...
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On Sunday, February 17, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
the first time i wrote it down was in august, but it was posted on another site including the part after the line.