Dreams

By Intoxicating Delirium

They were so close
Inseperable they seemed at the most

Then one day she pushed him away
Harder and harder untill they didn't speak on any day

Now he is gone forever it seems
But she's wrong, he is with her in her dreams

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Copyright 2013 caitlinryen
Published on Wednesday, February 13, 2013.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

It's a short one.
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  • darkheartmagic On Saturday, September 12, 2015, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    Something that can't can't be stopped....dreams. In very few words I loved this work

  • A former member wrote: good write :)

  • Scorpio999 On Tuesday, October 22, 2013, Scorpio999 (52)By person wrote:

    ahhhh ... ouch .. hurts so goood .. love it .. naturally ..

  • darkheartmagic On Sunday, August 25, 2013, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    well penned my friend

  • A former member wrote: extremely dolorous.. enjoyed it.. the connection between dreams and reality is nicely defined..thanks for sharing..

  • A former member wrote: Short and Sweet, Right to the point. And how true are these words spoken, even months later, they come to us in our dreams. Great work :)

  • A former member wrote: It's short... But carries such a deep message which just implants itself in your head, it's very good.

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Monday, March 18, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (275)By person wrote:

    Thank you :)

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