this ain't abt a poet
By FadedBlues
{inside me are the heart of the savage & the blood of the beast,
bridled & rode hard by the spirit of the poet, in the name of
adventure &
art.}
I started this wandering
a long time ago.
expectations were high
but the payoff was low.
the road never took me
to a silver-strand shore,
but to cities of labor
& to jungles of war.
there were days lost in thunder
when the sky would scream.
these were tempered by nights
I made love in a dream.
on my desolate high-ways
there were times that I found
a friend or a faith
to which I could be bound.
after years in the sun
I’ll reflect in the shade
of the loves that I’ve lost
& the friends that I’ve made.
my heart still reminds me
that it could have been worse,
to have missed Nature’s beauty
& the glory of verse.
now the road is short
& I’m gettin’ old.
& this poem is over -
my
story is told.
Comments on "this ain't abt a poet"
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On Saturday, May 3, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
I love it, Fadeed Blues, you're a brilliant poet; I love your work. 10.
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A former member wrote:
This is marvelous... you have such a great talent and I truly enjoy reading your works, I've read alot just don't know what to comment half the time because no comment I could come up with could be worthy! Awesome! Thanks for sharing!
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
This feels like my life flashing before my eyes, well said sir!
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
this most deffinately is about a poet... their journey through lifes trials and tribulations... but it is about love and all of the emotions that come with it also.... i have always enjoyed reading you and collabing when we have mutual ground for a foundation.... thank you hon for sharing this ;))) M...
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On Monday, February 11, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(612) wrote:
I agree with everyone and I say this is an a great poem from a great poet. Always looking for more. Cool, man. Later -
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On Monday, February 11, 2013, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
Thanks as always. the comments you leave here, it's not why I write, but it's why I post my work here. you're amazing!...
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A former member wrote:
I've said before that some of your writes have a 'wandering samurai' feel to them...never has that sensation been more pronounced than it is in this poem. It's the art & adventure of it all, ain't it?...some of the best poems contain no words. You took my mind down the road & back with this one...outstanding.
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On Sunday, February 10, 2013, Nehema
(960) wrote:
You're so much more than a poet in many ways, but this is definitely about a poet. A poet picks up the important details others overlook. A poet remembers, sweet memories as well as the painful. If you aren't a poet, I've never read one. Its the simple truths that make a life -XXOO
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On Sunday, February 10, 2013, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
I will never erase this as ling as im alive. and the glory of verse. my god you fucking blow me away and i can't help but to genuinely love the fuck out of you.. damn baby.. damn damn damn.. i told karen lets meet here and see who loves you more and whose comment more perverted. but i can't be perverted with a master poet ringing my bell.. damn it. so i look forward to the next opportunity to fuck you verbally..lol. damn your good.
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On Sunday, February 10, 2013, Strataic
(100) wrote:
It's alway a joy to read your works, Though I may not always comment. I liked how this was set out and the journey of the beast, poet, and savage heart. Thank you.
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On Sunday, February 10, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
Your poems feed a mind with a nutritious wordy goodness , that keeps us young. Stunning faded !