fabricated.

By eidos





and so tonight I drink to the image of you
and the hopes that it stays blurred
when I sober up in the morning.





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Copyright 2013 eidos
Published on Thursday, February 7, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, April 4, 2023, carlosjackal (3016)By person wrote:

    You are damn good.

  • A former member wrote: short and simple but so much meaning in so few words.. thanks for sharing!

  • Dei On Friday, February 8, 2013, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    I wish we could all be so lucky. Nicely presented, tragic and romantic the way i like it.

  • NikesRain On Thursday, February 7, 2013, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    short, to the point and a history of the heart repeating itself. . they only blur when we're ready for it... no drink needed... better yet... just let the image be and use it as a reminder of lessons learned.

  • dwells On Thursday, February 7, 2013, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    Wondering if that waking up would be alone, or possibly with a two-bagger sharing your bed? But then I think Dybbuk gave it away maybe, cheers!

  • A former member wrote: Extremely Short.. Could Have Been Better..

  • Dei On Friday, February 8, 2013, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    guess you arent a fan of the ancient and widely respected poetic form of haiku then? mr. All Alone person.

  • eidos On Friday, February 8, 2013, eidos (41)By person wrote:

    poetry doesn't have to be long.

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