the sound of standing still.
By eidos
last night I was your forever
and this morning
we eat breakfast as strangers
in separate houses. and I want to say
that
you're not worth the ink to write out my thoughts.
but we
both know that's not the truth.
I just want to not know you anymore.
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Copyright 2013 eidos
Published on Saturday, February 2, 2013.
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On Wednesday, September 9, 2015, sheff
(115) wrote:
Oh, how I know this. So very, very well. I never discovered what kept calling me back, nor could I forget. Resonating. Thanks
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On Thursday, February 28, 2013, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
hits straight to the heart easily... a retrospect tinted with regret perhaps or just a truth admitted quietly instead of shouted in aggravation... it holds much for a concise piece...nicely done
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On Sunday, February 17, 2013, boneplate
(58) wrote:
hit me right in the heart.......i am all to familiar with these feelings. a stab to heart to be sure.
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On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
"this morning we eat breakfast as strangers" - I liked this contrast to "forever". I can feel where you are coming from in this one, and I loved the structure and flow. Great job! Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
I know this.
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A former member wrote:
What a deathblow you deal.
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On Saturday, February 2, 2013, Dei
(665) wrote:
a truly powerful sentiment.