Concrete Kissing Daisies

By Virgils Vigil


Concrete kissing daisies;

A symptom of the spring,

Man has since molested.

Here they come again.

 

Now they drink—so lazy!

From petals they extort,

Subtle love; yet supple!

How stems and limbs contort.




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Copyright 2013 Virgils Vigil
Published on Thursday, January 31, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Tuesday, May 28, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Great piece! Love the imagery and flow of this one. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • heterodynemind On Sunday, February 24, 2013, heterodynemind (10)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed the comparison between stems and limbs and their movements..high art! (smile)

  • A former member wrote: Very well written and strong words spoken.

  • Deathkitten On Thursday, January 31, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    INTENSE! I like :)

  • Alchemist On Thursday, January 31, 2013, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    I like the simplicity and rhythm of this work. The title is great and the idea behind it lets you come up with your own thoughts on the meaning and words used. Great write

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