Concrete Kissing Daisies
By Virgils Vigil
Concrete kissing daisies;
A symptom of the spring,
Man has since molested.
Here they come again.
Now they drink—so lazy!
From petals they extort,
Subtle love; yet supple!
How stems and limbs contort.
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Copyright 2013 Virgils Vigil
Published on Thursday, January 31, 2013.
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On Tuesday, May 28, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Great piece! Love the imagery and flow of this one. Ciao, T/S
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On Sunday, February 24, 2013, heterodynemind
(10) wrote:
I enjoyed the comparison between stems and limbs and their movements..high art! (smile)
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A former member wrote:
Very well written and strong words spoken.
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On Thursday, January 31, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
INTENSE! I like :)
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On Thursday, January 31, 2013, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
I like the simplicity and rhythm of this work. The title is great and the idea behind it lets you come up with your own thoughts on the meaning and words used. Great write