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Taffy Bullet
By FearlessDragon
Riding the W S of
the beat
A E
V
Lights
flicker and flash
Roadways of electric flame
Guide the way
Treble seduces my brain
Enter through the lion's void
C
a h into eternity
r s
Keep the beat going!
B
e a m s of light surrounding
"Boom Boom Boom!"
Echo
in the night
Ecstacy ignites
Body heat!
Glow worm's coil
Follows
my path
Green jets explode
Glass pavement rocks and
twists
Multi - Colored wet dream turns
Black hole ahead
No reality!
Time warps carry us
into the horizon
"Bass Bass"! Skips my heart
Sweat drenches
into a sea
Everlasting purity
y
k
Swimming into the s
I take my ride!
Bouncing outer space rips me to shreds
Simply crystallized p
i e c e
s
I Illuminate the darkness
Mutate
into human form
Shooooooooooting--------> star superman
Forsakes
oblivion in his rear view
The mind awakens in a taffy bullet
Colliding with its own existence
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Copyright 2013 FearlessDragon
Published on Thursday, January 31, 2013.
Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Ok, so i'm a little high...Comments on "Taffy Bullet"
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A former member wrote:
This is excellent.. I love it... as always! lines 9-12 are my fave. Very niice good sir! :))
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On Thursday, January 31, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276)
wrote:
Driving away ........... Into your own head space. Loved the creation of shapes with words that have a strong link throughout. Creating forward movement created by your imagery! Amazballs sweet. X x x
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On Thursday, January 31, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
Great forwards movement I mean. I bobbed up on that first wave, by the way. X
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On Thursday, January 31, 2013, Virgils Vigil
(75) wrote:
A wonderful race through the mind. At times the broken words slow the reader down from otherwise perfect pacing. W a v e s and p i e c e s are good examples of that. Other times it is used very artistically and helps synchronize fluidity. C r a s h is my favorite. You might consider some editing, but being high can create feelings of sudden starts and stops, so it may fit best as is. Keep up the good work.
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