Window Panes
By DarkDruidess
Night seeps in through sealed window panes
Creating fluttery drafts with stained curtains
Tainting the air with that damp odor
That permeates and invades the senses
Withdrawing an involuntary moan
From those underneath that darkened window
Causing blankets to be drawn closer
And pillows hugged tighter…desperately
Seeking that left over fragrance
Of heated bodies and passionate embraces
Recalling warmer times, happier encounters
Instead of the sour auras that invade
Once pleasant dreams and memories
Leaving brows creased with doubt
And muscles straining in a frown
While silent tears fall unaccounted for
Against soft sheets and plump cheeks
Left to dry in that foul air
Seeping once again through window panes
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Copyright 2013 DarkDruidess
Published on Tuesday, January 29, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
I've had a pretty big block lately...this feels a little wrong, I don't know...looking for constructive input please...Thank you....Awards
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On Sunday, March 23, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Absolutely beautiful work; i can relate to the tears on the pillow. Love it. 10
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A former member wrote:
One of the times where the chill just sneaks up no matter how deep inside the blankets you hide. A very vivid read.
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...this is good, Dru, the passion & the carousel of it. we feel the regret of those in the bed who now hug only pillows...
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A former member wrote:
Never wash the sheets when love has passed.
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A former member wrote:
Very nice imagery!
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A former member wrote:
I love your writing, wonderful poem.