. ~ curvation ~ .
By NikesRain
let me melt
into frost painted windows
so when the sun rises
all the winking crystals
slip into my every breath
coating my whispers
in snowflake elegance
let me lay
in a forgotten love note
curled around every frayed edge
stretched out and languid
along every worn fold
letting the script
fuse to my every sigh
let me rest
among flowers set in a milk can
smiling softly among the colors
as their heads nod in reverence
quiet affirmations of hope
etched along their stems
to leaves bending with the wind
let me dream
of these too soft things
of being as graceful
as lotus seeds sleeping
in an antique ivory teacup
against the frosted window
beside the forgotten love note
beneath the nodding flowers
just for a while
when reality is too heavy
let me
Comments on ". ~ curvation ~ . "
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On Monday, February 29, 2016, Drea
(1443) wrote:
I caught myself sighing soft little peaceful sighs of while reading this. This is so elegant.
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On Saturday, March 7, 2015, Dismalmind
(27) wrote:
Your sweet words took me to a peaceful ideological place, gradually, and there I could gaze into the harsh reality we're living. Beautiful piece!
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A former member wrote:
very enchanting.
feeling your words within me brought to light a gentle yearning, almost like a breath of clean air that i havent had in ages. thank you for this
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A former member wrote:
Let us waver invisible in heat waves of your warmth, in the eyelashes as your eye closes for dreams to return. Let us sit single file like small children at bedtime's birth, hidden behind the can which rests your soul's flowers within, huddled close to one another as unrealized nighttime whispers spill from weary lips ... we are the cracks therein, the dark behind the teeth, the beating of the drum as you wait for day to come. Rest, Poet.
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A former member wrote:
Your words are so beautiful and exquisite.. amazing work!
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A former member wrote:
The elegance displayed here is fantastic.
I feel every line. Nice one.
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On Monday, January 14, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
wow I am totally lost in your elegant words. this is truly beautiful.
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On Friday, January 11, 2013, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
your imagery is awesome here....".let me lay in a forgotten love note"....truly one of your best here...i was moved to say the least...so very well done............urban
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On Tuesday, January 8, 2013, dwells
(4288) wrote:
Lotus Blossom - this exudes the elegance within and the structure enhanced mightily, cheers!
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On Saturday, January 5, 2013, Fallenfromgrace
(104) wrote:
Very beautiful. Great write. 10/10
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On Friday, January 4, 2013, IAmNorge
(39) wrote:
Such a life is what we would all want, this made me feel happy, like a grand escape, a beautiful one, well done.