five a.m.

By eidos







since you left
the worst part of falling asleep
is waking up.






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Copyright 2013 eidos
Published on Thursday, January 3, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: The way this hurts is piercing.

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Saturday, January 5, 2013, Dreaming in Stanzas (303)By person wrote:

    All the poignancy from "Dreaming With A Broken Heart" shoved into 12 words. Awesome.

  • NikesRain On Friday, January 4, 2013, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    so concise yet holding a mountain of emotions that floods the heart and catches the breath.... perfect

  • Electric-Chair On Thursday, January 3, 2013, Electric-Chair (122)By person wrote:

    I feel you

  • Nehema On Thursday, January 3, 2013, Nehema (960)By person wrote:

    Being able to sleep in freedom only to wake up to be reminded... - XXOO Scholar

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