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my questions to you
By knightmirror
what are you thinking???
are you still learning???
listening???
or have you forgotten what we're striving to find
what
makes you better???
how have you gotten this far???
close???
you're surrounded by negativity and it's so hard to watch
haven't you had enough of this chic in control
of life you recently
revealed to me and have yours stole
i see you become complacent more
each day
on a mindset where nothings in your way
well
my colleague
your greed's
becoming your disease
with each breath
she takes
you that much
closer to
death
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Copyright 2013 knightmirror
Published on Wednesday, January 2, 2013.
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A former member wrote:
"You're surrounded by negativity and its so hard to watch." The simple truth, clearly stated, but with enough force to leave me breathless. Nicely done.
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On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, brokensme
(20)
wrote:
great write, i got very familiar feelings by reading this, thank you for the poem
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