Misty Grey Road
By lupus tenebrae
The road, once ended in a misty grey,
foreign to the amethyst in ruin.
Tail-lights winking, disappearing
in the fog,
entering dimensions, somewhere in between,
the median, guard rail and dimming streetlights,
the road once ended
in a misty grey,
Mimicing the dusty white of snowfall
in blindfolds, of candles in dark rooms,
foreign to the amethyst
in ruin.
All while asking houses for direction
homeward;
they had burnt out following ghosts,
tail-lights, winking, disappearing
in the fog.
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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Saturday, December 29, 2012.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Something semi-written on the road, during a very foggy night.Comments on "Misty Grey Road"
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On Sunday, December 30, 2012, Devilish
(2662) wrote:
Beautiful. but why wouldn't it be? how do I miss your posts. i check itleast the first 3 or 4 pages everyday.
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On Saturday, December 29, 2012, Dei
(665) wrote:
This is a really decent example of paradelle. I usually find it obnoxious and annoying but here it's rather beautiful. I feel like I'm "coming down" from an epiphany.
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On Saturday, December 29, 2012, Electric-Chair
(122) wrote:
Reminds me of a all night drive to somewhere, in ther middle of nowhere. love it, gave me a creepy but peaceful feel, Great words
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On Saturday, December 29, 2012, dwells
(4288) wrote:
Amethyst must be your birthstone I'd guess? An unusual word color for a repetitive line in verse, cheers (whatever your sign is!).
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On Saturday, December 29, 2012, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
Actually, the amethyst stems from elsewhere, my stone is garnet. Thanks for reading, Dan.
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On Saturday, December 29, 2012, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
well done....your imagery is perfect....