someone asked me what I thought of you, once

By Malice In Wonderland

I said


you were the sun
warming my.bed
and the fire in my eyes

the fight in the corner
backburner places
keeping me alive

you speak
In steel.spinesong
malady
the glitter
in our ash and.snow.apocolypse
bleeding hues
of perfection
to bomb blasted reality
amidst the searing truths of mankind

our fingers wove together
like antique threading
on an old war uniform
impeccable and weathered
seamless
and beautiful

the tides crest
on lunar smiles
unknown
in the comforts of paradise
that someone will find.

someday

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Copyright 2012 Rain In The Willows
Published on Thursday, December 27, 2012.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"
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  • FadedBlues On Friday, December 28, 2012, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...artfully conceived. love in its many costumes is the bounty of poetry...

  • BetaWolfinVA On Thursday, December 27, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    Here is hoping that u are still with this person... such feeling deserves to be rerwarded Scholar

  • Malice In Wonderland On Thursday, December 27, 2012, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    sad to say that has never happened, sir :) Scholar

  • Dei On Thursday, December 27, 2012, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    i think this is rather lovely dear. its warm, and chilled and well traveled. I think we should all hope to be so lucky as to find such a hand to fit so seamlessly.

  • A former member wrote: Wow, this touched my heart in so many ways... I truly loved this piece ^^

  • PoetessDarkly On Thursday, December 27, 2012, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    wow willow this is awesome. melancholy yet so promising.

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