epiphany

I never understood the feeling behind wanting to die.
until I saw the door close behind you
and forgot the feeling of
being alive.

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Published on Monday, December 17, 2012. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "epiphany"

On Tuesday, April 4, 2023, carlosjackal (3014) wrote:

Volumes spoken in so few words and a title that caps things off perfectly.
A former member wrote: well expressed!
On Tuesday, December 18, 2012, PoetessDarkly (700) wrote:

there is a whole novel written in those few lines. awesome imagery
On Monday, December 17, 2012, Dreamscape (22) wrote:

Wow, words can hit fast, that made me feel sad at the speed of light
A former member wrote: loving can be so hard, and yet it is the only thing to do. thanks.
A former member wrote: Perfect, although short but intersting...to the point. Keep writing.
On Monday, December 17, 2012, Nehema (960) wrote:

Spot on, poetry at its simplest and finest. The only recommendation I'd can make is maybe to format in Center alignment, might make it look like a spiral or funnel (or not!) Thanks for sharing - XXOO