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Storyteller
By Nehema
Visions
of dualities
Personification
through
Colorful
personalities
Though
mine be untrue
Birthed in
my imagination
Set free through
a keyboard
Satisfying the needy starvation
Sometimes striking a chord
Middle aged and decaying
My
mind needs renovating
Ideas and ideals
fraying
Past life deteriorating
Comforting
and wise
It's the lies I despise
No need for disguise
Truth
= the greatest prize
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Copyright 2012 Robyn Layne
Author's Note:
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A former member wrote:
Like the word play. Keep it up!
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On Sunday, November 17, 2013, darkheartmagic
(82)
wrote:
very powerful write loved it. I haven't had the chance to get on much but I look forward to reading some more of you work. outstanding write.
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On Wednesday, December 19, 2012, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
Well done, plainly structured and to the point.A bonus that there is a point, truth=10.
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On Monday, December 17, 2012, haunted
(850) wrote:
very cool robyn, im wondering if i should post my poe101 poem. i wasnt sure if i wanted to kind of do that because it was written specificaly for the class. but your entry is perfect for an intro. awesome!
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On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Strataic
(100) wrote:
Because honesty can transform something and last longer as is the beauty of this piece thanks
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On Monday, December 17, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Thanks Cipher, indeed. Honesty builds the strongest foundation and I've found it to be the simplest way to combat fear.
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A former member wrote:
i love this, such an honor to truth
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On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
You know me better than most on this subject superman :) thanks for your continued support - XXOO
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
You are a wonderful storyteller... however close to the truth it may be...your words bite and make a mark. No silly veils to hide behind- just tell it like it is. I love your words. Well done my friend.
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On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
I miss you!! Thanks, that means a lot coming from you
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
A truth seeker, there are only a few of us left! Well done Baby Girl and since this was for the class, I noticed how your rhyme scheme changed in the second half. Not a bit of a distraction and well done!
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On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Why you gotta rat me out daddy? lol
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
wow this is awesome! I love the flow and imagery. awesome awesome love it.
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On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Thanks PD ;)
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Star
(920) wrote:
wow.. top spot on this one... this is fanastic... awesome (:
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On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Thanks for your continued support Bran, loves - XXOO
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Oh my god yay for the sweetie. i am proud of you . high five .. down low.. turn around .. now knees to the ground.. lol. yay.
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On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
lmao, really? Love you mama
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...proudly stated, Robyn. poetry is a passionate need, & at times a painful struggle...
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On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
Indeed baby, thanks for always taking the time
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
The first stanza is killer and I love the whole idea. You are always striking a chord.
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On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
I have a hard time trying to write for myself, maybe the class will help... Thanks Shawn
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