Mimicing a Deathwatch

By lupus tenebrae

 



I feel your breathing, vanish here,
in jilting all we could have had,
our eyes, in truth, could meet as one,
and miss each other, just as bad.

Exchanging lyrics, in our sleep,
exhaling rhythm, to a fault.
These perfect words, seem just enough,
and taken with a grain of salt.

A deathwatch mimics every beat,
at least it tries to keep its pace
and somewhere in translating mine,
it fumbled in regaining place.

We’re side by side and hand in hand,
in copasetic lingering.
These moments never live eternal;
phantoms, in their fingering.

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Tuesday, December 11, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Essentially, a practice lyric poem for a bigger project.
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  • dwells On Thursday, December 13, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    I hate to be fingered by those moments, but sometimes they just won't let one be - Cheers Wolfie!

  • Malcholm Dark On Wednesday, December 12, 2012, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    copasetic as usual... your wording is very good... always a pleasure my friend...

  • PoetessDarkly On Wednesday, December 12, 2012, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    wow awesome write. My favorite part is the last few paragraphies.

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