Thinking Of You

By gearhead

I don't know how i feel, my mind seems to blur

All of these thoughts, these thoughts of her

I find myself staring, theres a wall in my head

All is blocked, tattered and webbed 


I have this feeling, she cares after all

But i cant stop thinking, something is wrong 

I am here to listen, her stories so sad

How could some one do this, to a women like that 

I want to protect her, but she hasn't let me in

What can i do, i wana be more than friends


The beauty of her smile, hides a life time of pain 

Taking her hand, theres so much to gain

I don't know how i feel, but i cant lie

I want her with me, by my side 

These feeling's i have, built up inside 

I have told her this, only one time


Shes all i can think about, always on my mind

Working away....

Falling behind ...........

I don't know how i feel, but its another side

A side of me, i have yet to find 

And this feeling i have, not so blind

Consumed by thought, where is my mind

I cant help but think 

I want her

By my side.....


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Copyright 2012 gearhead
Published on Wednesday, November 28, 2012.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I cant get this girl out of my head.
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  • A former member wrote: I could feel your desire to her so genuine and raw. Great piece!

  • A former member wrote: There were a few grammar issues but other that this was an easy to read, easy to relate too poem that I feel was very well penned and emotional. I can tell that you wrote it from the heart, which is a very good thing!

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, November 29, 2012, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...nice write. that uncertainty is a tough thing to be afflicted with...

  • PoetessDarkly On Wednesday, November 28, 2012, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    first paragraph last word did you mean blur or the color bluer? very emotional write loved it.

  • gearhead On Wednesday, November 28, 2012, gearhead (19)By person wrote:

    yup fixed it thanks for catching that, still fixing a few things i missed lol

  • A former member wrote: Very meaningful write, I love it. I can also relate; I understand that sort of suffering of always having that someone on your mind. True words, keep it up :)

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